Writing sample



For writing this week we had to to a writing sample.


Writing sample 22d August 2017.Emma Rendle Image result for clean room vs messy room

Is it better to have a tidy room or a messy room .

Its it better to have a tidy or messy room . I would have a tidy room to a
messy one . Because a lot of kids have  not very big room. So if it was messy it would make not much space . If your room was messy at some point your mum or dad might go in and clean your room . That takes up their time.But if you have a clean room and keep it clean. You could go do something fun.

If you ever have friends over. You have a clean room you can sit and talk. But if you have a messy room you and your friends probably don't even want to be in the room. Some people feel more relaxed in a tidy room  . If you have a messy room sometimes it can start smelling bad . But if you have a tidy room and put your washing a away it with not small

I believe it is better to have a tidy room
Way
  • It easy to get around your room
  • It will not small
  • It's easy to find things
  • It will make you more relaxed
  • You can fit more things is your room
  • Your friends and sit on the floor in your room
  • It easy to know where stuff goes

This Is way i think people should have tidy room I hope I made you think people should have a tidy room










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